Dear random bank looking to gain my business: You won’t get it.
Dear Dana Steibolt
I am a business loan and relationship officer at XXXXXXXXXXX located in PA and MD sinceXXXX and one of your customer.
I would like to meet you and learn about your business.
I have experienced that many business owners deal with financial and unknown challenges. Their current banking relationship and financial services offering may not tailor to their business needs.
I will reach out to you by phone within next couple of days in hopes of finding a convenient time to meet; I am looking forward to speaking with you soon.
It’s one thing to misspell my name, but it’s another thing to send an email that is just full of grammatical errors and spacing and formatting issues.